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ONGOING SITE PLOT:
Welcome to the alliances of the fighting cats, the felidae fighters. They had always been in a constant struggle for survival, whether it be their Clans or families, which had settled in the lands before that of the Clans. Peace had settled over the land for many seasons, many moons, and the Clans and families prospered, sort of like a golden age.

However, things took a turn for the worse when suddenly Gang of Sorrows, as the gang was called, asked for a slice of territory. They wanted to adapt to become Clans, however, their true goal was to take over like their sibling gang, the Gang of Shadows. Ever since the asking and the abrupt move in of the Gang of Shadows, things have been going from bad to worse, and the peace that was shared for moons was torn apart. New threats began to spring up, and fires have been on the rise; suspicious.

Could the Clans and families survive their newfound ordeal? We will only find the answers through roleplaying. The felidae fighters unsheathe their claws on a new plot.

OTHER PLOTS/PLANNED:
Gangs vs. Clans ~ The Clans and the Gangs, joining up to form two groups FreedomClan and Gang of Unity, will have a war. Presented by Jaypaw.
Leaf-Bare's Curse ~ Firepaw catches a sickness called icecough and the only cure for it is the Star Flower, found rarely in the unknown territories. Presented by Jaypaw.

Got a plot to submit? Submit it here and wait for us staff to approve it. :3 ~ Jaypaw ;D

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Grammar Rules! | Fighting Techniques | The Terms of the Cat | Warrior Code | The Difference Between Rogue and Rouge!

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Leader: Souleclipse [m]
- - - [played by WhiteFang]
Deputy: Delicaterose [f]
- - - [played by Petal]
Meddie: Feathermist [f]
- - - [played by icey]
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Deputy: None
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Meddie: None
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Leader: Warpeclipse [m]
- - - [played by Cornpepper]
Deputy: Aeroflight [f]
- - - [played by Dreamydonno]
Meddie: Bubblewhisker [f]
- - - [played by Bubble]
Medd. App: Deadpaw [m]
- - - [played by Smally]

Leader: Frozeneclipse [m]
- - - [played by icey]
Deputy: None
- - - [open]
Meddie: None
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Medd. App: None
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Leader: Twilighteclipse [f]
- - - [played by Jaypaw]
Deputy: Ashfur [m]
- - - [played by almond]
Meddie: Jaggedbones [m]
- - - [played by Twinkle]
Medd. App: None
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Leader: Paintedeclipse [f]
- - - [played by Twinkle]
Deputy: Smallclaw [m]
- - - [played by Smally]
Meddie: Frostheart [f]
- - - [played by Shanny~]
Medd. App: Jaypaw [m]
- - - [played by Jaypaw]

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Grammar Rules!
« Thread Started on Sept 25, 2008, 11:52am »

These are commonly broken grammar rules that I'm getting tired of people breaking. Erin Hunter never broke these grammar rules, but a lot of RPers commonly do. So I will state them. Please read this -- I am no longer accepting posts that break these grammar rules after this date. You have been fairly warned.

Quotations: At the start of any quotations, you must have a comma unless it's a new sentence.
F.E: She said, "I have a thorn in my paw."
Bad example: She said "I have a thorn in my paw."

Please make sure you close your quotations, and at the end of every quotation, please add a period. I don't care if it's outside or inside, so long as you have one; it doesn't make sense if it isn't there.
F.E: She said, "I have a thorn in my paw,"
OR
F.E: She said, "I have a thorn in my paw".
Bad example: She said, "I have a thorn in my paw"

When you're ending a quotation sentence and then saying something after it that's considered part of the sentence, if there's a period at the end of the original quotation sentence, change it to a comma. It's improper to keep the period in.
F.E: "I have a thorn in my paw," she said.
Bad example: "I have a thorn in my paw." she said.
There is a reason for this. Look at the two sentences below of something Jaypaw did.
1: "I hate you so much right now," Jaypaw hissed.
2: "I hate you so much right now." Jaypaw hissed.
Sentence 1 indicates that the mannerism Jaypaw used while he was speaking was that of a hiss. Meaning, his voice was a hissy voice. Meanwhile, Sentence 2 says that Jaypaw hissed after he spoke. The two sentences have completely different meanings.

« Last Edit: Sept 25, 2008, 4:03pm by WhiteFang »

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